I introduce famous people in Kumamoto.
● First, Kuri-musityu-. Kuri-musityu- is very famous comedian in Japan. Kuri-musityu-is Teppei Arita and Shinya Ueda. They are from Kumamoto. They are from Seisei high school students.
I like Kuri-musityu-. Because, They are very interesting. I watch their TV program every day.
● Next, Usuta Kyouhei. He is very famous caricaturist in Japan. He is from Kumamoto. His masterpiece is 「SUGOIYO！ MASARUSAN」and 「PYU-TOFUKU! JYAGA-」His comic is gag comic. His comic is very interesting. I recommend his comic.
● Next, Teruyoshi Uchimura. He is UCCHAN&NANCYAN. He is very famous comedian in Japan.
He is from Kumamoto. He is from Hitoyoshi high school student in Kumamoto. They won 「birth comedian star」This prize is very honor. Their a comic dialogue by two comedians is very interesting. I like their a comic dialogue by two comedians .
● Next, Esupa- Ito. He is very famous comedian in japan. He is from Kumamoto. He say that I have supernatural power. He is not comfortable. But His supernatural power is very interesting.
I recommend his supernatural power.
Finally, Eiichirou Oda. He is very famous caricaturist. His masterpiece is 「ONE PIECE」ONE PIECE is very interesting. It is pirate story .He is from Tokai high school in Kumamoto. I am same his high school. I proud he. I recommend his comic.
I finish to introduce famous people in Kumamoto.〔２４０〕
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Hello, Masaru.
This essay was due before mid-October (10/12) not early Nov. (11/4). Though your essay is unified by its focus on famous people in or from Kumamoto, it still appears incomplete. You should compose each paragraph, including the introduction and conclusion for the entire essay, of two or more sentences.
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